BenSapphire2011's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rebecca]

I love bright eyes.

WooleyWorld responds:

Youre tellin me. :p

[Jetpack Joyride Fan Art]

This is well done, but traumatizing

koyima responds:

lol

[Hi There]

make better art and don't be a cunt

Domonization responds:

Ditto.

[Hanzo]

Pretty neat, but the ass in the lower left corner needs a lot more detail.

(Also beefy women aren't my thing, but your art is still good nonetheless. I just wish you'd draw a normal sized woman so I could stare at her and not feel weird, not trying to be judgy or whatever :I)

NateDeCock responds:

Haha I feel ya, I just can't go back to drawin' normal sized women cuz I'm not used to it anymore lol

[Stone Written]

I absolutely LOVE how you drew the face.

BugsAndBooks responds:

Heya there you gem
and thank you for your celestial fix points as well as the face-praise :)

Have a wonderful day

[Thank You NG and Others :)]

ew

ShadyDingo responds:

Thanks :)

[Girly-Girl]

She kinda just looks like a tooth.

The lining is too scratchy and thick, the mouth is absent of details, the eyelashes aren't good, shading's alright, needs more detail overall.

It's not that good, but it's not -bad-.

Greebs responds:

hmmm yeah i kinda thought id try something different with the linework, ok thanks for the feed back

[Frank Horrigan]

FRANKIE!

This... really isn't that good. The lining is too scratchy, and the colouring and shading is very poorly done. I recommend using photoshop right after the initial sketch, and use the sketch as a base for making the actual image. It's what a lot of people do, and it turns out well.

The proportions are pretty bad, but not awful. I mainly speak of perspective, like his right hand... Ugh...

All in all, I just recommend more practice, using some bases/poses you can find on Deviantart, and using Photoshop or Paint.NET to make the final product.

Willanatior responds:

Alright, I appreciate the input, I acknowledged these flaws before I posted it but decided on posting it anyway. I immediately picked up the book Michael Hampton's Drawing With Figures which has helped me get back into proportions and loosening up my hand. It should be worth noting this drawing was just such an accomplishment for me because it was the first finish piece in a while, even with its flaws. I'd recommend, and even appreciate you check out some of my other art and see how I'm still progressing my artistic goals. As for you, while I appreciate your feedback, I wouldn't go around commenting on others' in such condescending tones when you yourself have no art in which others can critique upon. I recommend you experience the feeling of putting your hours of work out in public for others to judge upon with whatever words they please; I'm sure your tone will change. Once again, I am very grateful for your feedback, as I will note and focus on not repeating these flaws in my next drawings. I understand this is the internet, and exposing yourself will always come with negative feedback, I just recommend those who dish it also experience it themselves. Thanks!

[Art trade]

Really wonderfully done, I just don't like ponies.

I wish it was a person, then I could just stare at it uncompromisingly. It's really good. The lining is soft and comfortable to look at, the colouring is pleasant, the shading is all smooth, and I love the facial expression. You should draw people like this, I hate anthroes :P

bloominglove responds:

Haha Everyone have their own preference of what to stare at. Some like looking at humans, others ponies. lol But thank you for the compliment. I just do what makes me happy. :)

[Ball Breaker (SFW)]

It's like if the dudes who make south park decided to lose half their brain cells and make a thick-outline version of Maple from Gravity Falls. It's not good.

The lining is very nice and seems to be the only good part of this, seeing as the proportions are terrible, the minimal shading is dumb, and the face (especially the fucking facial expression) is the worst part of this image.

Is that helpful?

Domonization responds:

Haha, you're so funny.