Amazing shading and coloring. The palette is amazing and the colors are a joy to look at.
But the face is awful and the general shaping is weird. The proportions are very good, but I just cannot get past the atrocious face. I know I'm being very harsh, but it's true. The face really does not fit. In another context it would look good, but her, with a character from an *anime*, it looks odd if not just bad.
It may just be me being extreme, and if you choose to ignore my criticism and keep doing faces that way, it is up to you, but I must urge you to at the very least style your faces different in certain contexts or styles.