BenSapphire2011's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chel]

Honestly, there really isn't anything good in this picture. The proportions are bad, the coloring is bad, the shading is bad, the background is bad... The last time I posted a review like this, the artist told me why I was wrong about how awful his thing really was, stating that the criticism was 'maddeningly unhelpful.'

I don't know how to make this helpful, I just really want you to know that this isn't good. I see a lot of good, bad, and a lot more of ugly on this portal, and this just goes in the 'bad' category. It's not horrid, it's not putrid, I don't want to gouge my eyes out after looking at it, it's not like that fukamondo guy who posts the hideous fetish art, this is just bad. This CAN be improved, and your other work I've looked at, you can do better. I think that instead of drawing bad stuff like this, you should do more stylized surreal stuff like this:
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/maskedguardian/140716

You have talent, you have skill, you have potential, but it is woefully wasted here.

[this was a really weird review. sorry if I sounded like a dick, feel free to be a dick back]

[[ S A I L O R M A R S ]]

Amazing shading and coloring. The palette is amazing and the colors are a joy to look at.

But the face is awful and the general shaping is weird. The proportions are very good, but I just cannot get past the atrocious face. I know I'm being very harsh, but it's true. The face really does not fit. In another context it would look good, but her, with a character from an *anime*, it looks odd if not just bad.

It may just be me being extreme, and if you choose to ignore my criticism and keep doing faces that way, it is up to you, but I must urge you to at the very least style your faces different in certain contexts or styles.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

Thank you for your input! I can't help but agree. I've been realizing that my faces have started going in a very bad direction (especially when dealing with the nose). I really appreciate you bringing up this topic. This definitely gives me something to practice for the next few days! :) Hopefully I'll be able to improve on that aspect.

Thank you once more!

[NCR Ranger]

Odd proportions.

Everything else is pretty good.

[Zone-tan + SPEEDPAINTING]

stahp

Fukamondo responds:

Without a good reason i dont think so, little kid.

[Military gal]

Proportions and face need heavy improvement. Other than that, the coloring and shading is quite good.

[Dread]

Improvements need to be made all around.

Although, the proportions aren't too bad. But everything else is pretty awful.

xscar10 responds:

While I do want to take the time to thank you for the critique, the the statement that there are unspecified improvements that need to be made is maddeningly unhelpful.

[Arcis Sec cover]

Fucking amazing. The proportions on the legs are really off.

I'll have to check out this book of yours.

buriedantenna responds:

Thanks for the comment. I'll make a news post about the book when it's ready to go.

[Fallout 4]

If there's anything I want you to draw disgraceful immodest fanart of, it's fallout. Please do more.

[The black]

This is why art should be blammable

coolman2003 responds:

first it was a art, then virus came, and now you can see it

[Nova VS. Diablo]

I've seen quite a bit of art recently that takes modern stuff and turns it into the cheesy-lovely game/movie art of the late 20th century. I love this shit! I want to see so much more of this!

Great job, really. No idea who or what any of this is, but It's fantastic.

bella-art responds:

Thank you very much!! It's a character from Heroes of the Storm, I've never played the game before, I drew it for a contest on deviant - art. :)